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Arctic opens giant mouth Blows chilled breath Across the frozen tundra Down, down across state after state Heading south, southeast dipping deep Poet sits with chilled ankles and feet By the glow of her computer moon North winds whip naked oaks Uninvited breeze enters seemingly safe room Heat pump's silence exacerbates Wind gust's lifting of the roof Stirring of the wind chimes Their hollow sound being driven Into a voice of frenzy A thinning, gray headed man snores Heat pump clicks on Temporary relief for chilled feet As the poet tries to visualize Those oaks that get no relief Except when gusts slow Oaks' dead brown leaves are tossed Dried, crinkled left 'pon the cold earth As a temporary blanket of warmth Strong gusts break weakened limbs Their occasional crash frightens Any leaf left hanging by a brittle stem gives way To the breath blown from the arctic's giant mouth Date written: 12-23-2022 Sponsor: Kim Rodrigues Date: 12-23-2022

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Date: 12/23/2022 7:34:00 AM
Beautifully done, Sara. The might of the frosty wind can be deeply felt from your poem. A great entry for the contest. All the Best dear poet friend !
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/23/2022 7:52:00 AM
Thank you, Valsa. I appreciate the kind review. Sara
Date: 12/23/2022 5:27:00 AM
Winter is gushing most everywhere in the US right now. I know you are feeling it from the images you convey. Stay safe, Sara. Happy Holidays!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/23/2022 7:06:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay. I hope this is a great Christmas season for you and yours as well. Your visit is uplifting. Sara

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