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'the Wings To Fly Again'

Don’t promise her the world, because it is not yours to give, promise to love her completely she might open up and give you her broken heart, her most prized possession in the end it is a chance she might be willing to take be the one that gives her hope again, restore her frayed wings, watch her soar above the hurt, above the unknown with your love and that little thing called hurt and fear? Would be a distant memory…

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Date: 11/5/2010 10:28:00 AM
Hello Wilma, I love this vers libre, I am sending it right into my favorites. You have touched the very depth of feelings in this one. Thank you for this As Always, Shar
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Date: 11/3/2010 1:42:00 AM
Hi. I think you write beautiful poetry..You certainly have the poets touch.This is soft and gentle yet gives so much from the opening line to the last.Thank you Wilma.I really loved reading this. Love June(Sylvia)
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Date: 11/1/2010 3:05:00 PM
This was a beautifully written poem! I'm glad I found your poetry to read! This particular poem reminds me of my own relationship, so it really touches home!
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Date: 11/1/2010 11:59:00 AM
It was my pleasure to read your excellent writing today Wilma. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/1/2010 3:59:00 AM
To love someone who has been hurt before and own his or her trust in your love is an amazing thing. .Wings can lead you anywhere,beautiful!
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Date: 10/31/2010 5:34:00 PM
Great thoughts.... so true.... the moon and the world are not his to be given.
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Date: 10/31/2010 2:07:00 PM
lovely write my dear poet darling...as always.. Love Michael
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Date: 10/31/2010 11:43:00 AM
I like how love can cure everything even fear in this poem, I like the opening line. :) Sheri
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