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The Window

Before he saw him he smelled the hate and malice Without thought he arched his back and his eyes searched for the target This threat to the women the man and there young one He knew she did not know Lurking in the dark place was a predator One of them but not All he could do was watch

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/3/2012 1:22:00 AM
Poignant write this! Predators cause fear and helplessness.
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Date: 9/30/2012 10:08:00 AM
A belated warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer you today Lois. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol
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