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the wind blew that day the hearse shiny black the coffin so small for a baby boy- weeping filled the air a lullaby slipped from my lips in the wild wind- drifting with tears with heads bowed hearts broken he left us - on small angel- wings ___________________________ December 10, 2019 Poetry/Diminished Hexaverse/the wind beneath angel wings Copyright Protected, ID 19-1206-643-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Pick A Title, Vol 12, Diminished Hexaverse sponsor, Edward Ibeh, Title Chosen #2- The Wind Beneath Angel Wings First Place

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Edward Ibeh

Date: 8/14/2022 6:24:00 AM

I HAD to find this masterpiece and fave it, Constance:-) Powerfully moving!

Constance La France
Date: 8/14/2022 3:02:00 PM

Edward, thank you for finding my poem (that was written for your contest) and for the compliment and FAV, blessings ~Constance

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/12/2020 1:28:00 PM

wow, this is so impressive, Dear Heart. Love this, and congrats on a top spot!

Constance La France
Date: 1/15/2020 2:47:00 AM

Andrea, thanks for the compliment and for the congrats, appreciate !

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/11/2020 3:51:00 PM

Poignant, Constance. Congrats on a most deserving gold medal win.

Constance La France
Date: 1/15/2020 2:48:00 AM

Line thanks so much for the congrats and the compliment !

Lu Loo

Date: 1/11/2020 2:51:00 PM

oh my sweet Dear Heart, my love to you. Congrats on this heart-wrenching deserving of a top win poem. x:-)-luloo

Constance La France
Date: 1/15/2020 2:48:00 AM

Lu, thanks so much for the compassion and the congrats !

Rob Carmack

Date: 1/11/2020 8:34:00 AM

Congrats Constance.

Constance La France
Date: 1/15/2020 2:49:00 AM

Rob, thanks for the congrats !

Edward Ibeh

Date: 1/11/2020 7:26:00 AM

Heartiest congratulations on your top win with this powerful write, Constance!:-)

Constance La France
Date: 1/15/2020 2:50:00 AM

Edward, thanks so much for another inspiring contest and for my wonderful win !

Beata Agustin

Date: 1/11/2020 6:19:00 AM

Congrats! God bless you.

Constance La France
Date: 1/15/2020 2:50:00 AM

Beata, thanks for the congrats !

Na Na

Date: 12/10/2019 3:17:00 PM

wow Constance your words fit perfectly in this. Cant say I`ve been to a childs funeral. Very somber. Thanks for sharing this. Best of luck in the contest

Constance La France
Date: 1/15/2020 2:51:00 AM

NA, thanks for the compliment on my poem !

Bobby May

Date: 12/10/2019 1:45:00 PM

Nothing worse in this world we live in, excellent Sis!!

Constance La France
Date: 1/15/2020 2:52:00 AM

Bobby, thanks for the visit and the compassion !

John Lawless

Date: 12/10/2019 9:10:00 AM

centering this accentuates the cyclone of perpetual pain associated with a child's death.

Constance La France
Date: 12/10/2019 9:17:00 AM

John, thanks for visiting and commenting, I agree this had to be centered !