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The Wind and the Wave

A slice of sea whisked its way up as wave Spinning sun's refulgence whithin its whirl The trouncing wind lashed it with ruinous rave To toss and tear on shores its lustrous swirl Silhouettes interred in silent sand grave Reeked of ruddy remnants of comber brave Date Jan 24 2017 Contest A Rhyme in 60 10 syllables each in six lines ABABAA Rhyme scheme

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Date: 2/3/2017 7:37:00 AM
A very deep piece with beautiful use of words and a wonderful first line.
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Sushma A. Singh
Date: 2/3/2017 7:59:00 AM
Thanks!
Date: 2/2/2017 6:55:00 PM
wow, great imagery in this one. BIG congrats on the win.
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Sushma A. Singh
Date: 2/6/2017 11:03:00 PM
Thank u so much, Andrea!
Date: 2/2/2017 2:48:00 PM
Congrats Sushma, for your WIN with this fine piece!!! ;-)
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Sushma A. Singh
Date: 2/3/2017 12:18:00 PM
Thanks a lot!
Date: 2/1/2017 4:06:00 PM
Beautiful imagery, well done!
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Sushma A. Singh
Date: 2/1/2017 11:07:00 PM
Thanks, Paulette!
Date: 1/29/2017 7:22:00 AM
- A truly wonderful poem, Sushma ... surprises me that no one has comments this ... a large 7 - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Sushma A. Singh
Date: 1/29/2017 10:56:00 PM
Thank You for your kind words n warm wishes, Anne - Lise!

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