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The Wind

The wind, it whispers willful words/ The most morose I've ever heard/ It brings its blackness to the brain/ And drives the mind out from the sane/ Demons screaming in the wind/ Can you hear their voices? Don't let them in/ They'll invade you, and slay you from within/ So just try to ignore your crawling skin/ If they see you, they'll bleed you, It's nature's whim, So just wade where the wind won't be let in/ The wind, it whines to the weakly willed, Those akin to the kind it's killed/ Deriving darkness from the depths, Of the failed who tried their best/ feeding on the weary parts/ Of a lonely human's heart/ Finding pain they hold within/ Every time they feel the wind/ Demons screaming in the wind/ Can you hear their voices? Don't let them in/ They'll invade you, and slay you from within/ So just try to ignore your crawling skin/ If they see you, they'll bleed you, It's nature's whim, So just wade where the wind won't be let in/

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Date: 2/2/2016 12:05:00 PM
I like when you say Demons screaming in the wind
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Bo Vigoren
Date: 2/3/2016 10:45:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 2/1/2016 5:21:00 PM
Bo Vigoren, :) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Bo Vigoren
Date: 2/3/2016 10:45:00 AM
Thank you kindly!
Date: 1/5/2016 1:25:00 PM
PS---- Bo, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 1/5/2016 1:24:00 PM
Bo, a great poem about the win. enjoyed the flow and the hint of alliteration you have here. :) SKAT
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Bo Vigoren
Date: 1/6/2016 11:18:00 AM
Thanks again :) I can't believe how fast I'm getting feedback!

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