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The Wind

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The Wind

The Wind

It’s a dark night

I hear the whistling 

through the trees

“Pitter patter” the sound of the rain falling

I closed all the windows and all the doors

I can still hear the rustling of the leaves

on the ground

It is Fall my favorite season of all

A chilly windy rainy night in mid-September

The wind sounds like wolves howling or like spirits who make noise at night after dark when the spirit world is closest to this world.

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  1. Date: 9/10/2014 7:53:00 PM
    Hi Ayesha, the two things I love about September, are, when the wind changes, and October is near... :) You did well, many lines were descriptive, I can hear the howling wind. Yes, Like a wolf... and my granddaughter, who loves to howl like a wolf... :) Awesome poem...LINDA

    Karim Avatar Ayesha Karim
    Date: 11/11/2014 9:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you.
  1. Date: 8/20/2014 7:13:00 PM
    My favorite season too. I love writing about autumn. I can see it inspires you too Ayesha.

    Karim Avatar Ayesha Karim
    Date: 11/11/2014 9:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes Autumn does inspire me and has since my childhood. Thanks for the comment!
  1. Date: 5/24/2014 9:54:00 AM
    A really good read, it painted a lovely picture. Thanks for sharing :) Jess

    Karim Avatar Ayesha Karim
    Date: 7/20/2014 8:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Jessica.
  1. Date: 2/14/2014 11:25:00 AM
    Wonderful imagery!-"Nicely Penned"!...enjoyed this work very much!//Sinclair

    Karim Avatar Ayesha Karim
    Date: 3/30/2014 8:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks so much Robert.
  1. Date: 12/30/2013 10:58:00 PM
    Hi Ayesha, Thanks for your comment on my poem. I look forward to reading more of your poetry. This was a lovely poem. I love the fall and I was born in September. I'll be back for more! ~ Tranquil Bleu

    Karim Avatar Ayesha Karim
    Date: 3/30/2014 8:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes and your welcome. I have like twenty seven poems on the Soup. Check out more of my poems...
  1. Date: 11/25/2013 10:16:00 AM
    How can i describe this? Ecstatic poetry

    Karim Avatar Ayesha Karim
    Date: 3/30/2014 8:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you.
  1. Date: 11/12/2013 8:38:00 PM
    Nice poem, Ayesha. The wind is perfectly described. Enjoyable overall. Check out some of mine. Peace.

    Karim Avatar Ayesha Karim
    Date: 3/30/2014 8:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks.
  1. Date: 9/29/2013 5:19:00 PM
    The wind can be a truly beautiful thing and you've embellished the wind and evinced its characteristics for all that it is. Excellent work

    Karim Avatar Ayesha Karim
    Date: 3/30/2014 8:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Emanuel. Thanks a lot.