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The Wind

~~The Wind~~ Look into my eyes Follow me into a world of ecstasy There and only there Will you find the peace to unwind ~ Beautiful brown eyes not blue Shady lids, stunning ocean view Embracing every word Hear the wind whisper your name Come with me Drown with me Into the abyss of loving rain Embrace this moment as I draw you in with words Release you with the warmth -------I was there I Share--I take I LOVE--I HATE Into my arms I am the charm Around your neck Around your wrist Listen to the voice of my beating heart It yearns The freedom of touch The freedom of speech. Of love, Of purity Like the wind I'll find my way Into your heart Arouse cheerful energy Of your insecurity and pen Follow me into the sea There we will fall into the deep Build sand castles Around dreams of reality Slip into my aura light Set to the rhythm of the oceanic night Now, listen to the breeze It's called out your name It's only a matter of time---------------- You'll find yourself calling out...... mine

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/24/2016 8:31:00 PM
I really enjoyed this poem and you are so gifted as a writer. I only wish that I could write so well !
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Date: 6/25/2016 11:21:00 PM
Dear Poet Destroyer A! Beautiful expression of deep feelings sought in the depth of beautiful eyes. "Build sand castles /Around dreams of reality". That's great. Thanks for your generous comment on my poem, Goblet of Desire.
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Date: 2/29/2016 1:42:00 AM
Wow, what a way with words,I loved it particularly the last verse. Best wishes, Tango.
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Date: 8/9/2014 10:16:00 PM
Great write with depth and feeling... Lisa
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Date: 8/7/2014 7:07:00 AM
You are a treasure house of enchanting expressions blended with the feelings coming from your heart. You create images to dwell deep and fascinate us. It goes as another favorite from your treasure of wonderful Poems. This one is yours another Precious Gem my friend. Sorry that I could not see it earlier. Love and best wishes always... PD .....Ravindra K Kapoor
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Date: 7/9/2014 9:49:00 PM
Enjoyed this verse...Like most relationships...Blowing in the wind.. have a great week... kjforce
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Date: 7/4/2014 2:23:00 PM
Hi Linda, I often look in your eyes and, like the wind, they talk to me...but in secret:) Have a nice weekend. // paul
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Date: 6/11/2014 12:26:00 AM
Hey girl. Glad I found this. Don't know if you meant it to be, but what an erotic write...luv it! I'd luv to stay and chat, but I've gotta run and take a cold shower. Hugs :)
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Date: 4/2/2014 11:00:00 PM
Just here to bid you goodnight. A few more comments to go!!
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Date: 3/21/2014 7:38:00 AM
Hi my dearest sis! Biggest hugs! Stopping by once again to enjoy & embrace one of the very precious gems of my loveliest & most fave poet . Adoring this stellar writes of urs as always.TYTYSM again. By the way hope u'r doin fine. Was here @ soup since 5.3opm. I'm sending u my loving hugs before logging off & goin 4 dinner. Miss u dearest sis & BFF of mine. Many warm hugs! I'll b back soon. lovem4everLeo
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Date: 1/22/2014 8:19:00 PM
I love your vision of nature in this one especially the wind iminagey this is simply beautiful and full of feeling towards nature itself. cheri i have one about the winds chasing each other around the world as if they were children spirits maybe one day i'll take it out of my archieves and post it. lol cheri
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Date: 1/20/2014 5:28:00 AM
Very good use of words, clear and makes a profound statement
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Date: 12/8/2013 12:56:00 PM
Love the wind... Your words here are so natural and in some ways wild and powerfull
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Date: 12/2/2013 12:48:00 PM
I would love to read this for you any time....Roger
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Date: 11/16/2013 2:58:00 PM
Beautiful my friend lovely, bravo and thank you for your commits, and yes I'm devoted to this man of mine, he can't read very well but it's ok. he is still my living inspiration although he dosesn't understand why. cheri
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Date: 10/31/2013 2:03:00 AM
Beautifully written, my poem was about finding love, loosing it, and moving on. Yours takes out the sadness.
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Date: 10/31/2013 2:52:00 AM
the poem is about manipulation, and grooming my next victim. ...lol well at least that is what I heard.
Date: 10/26/2013 11:42:00 AM
Wind and rain..the breeze and sandcastle..these elements arouse poignant emotions and deep thinking that when they come together are found only in this piece of yours...all senses are alive in this one...wonderful...keep a refilled ink pen nearby,k..- friend, Wendy
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Date: 10/24/2013 5:32:00 AM
Beautiful romantic piece. I love this one also.
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Date: 10/11/2013 12:36:00 AM
Deary Sista LINDA.. how are you.. just stop by to enjoy your great write,, thank you so much for sharing :) Much luv and lights <3 Sk
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Date: 10/7/2013 3:05:00 PM
Hi Linda Just returning from a trip....jet lag and the whole bit Loved this poem of yours and so happy we are friends.......big Hugs SuZ
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Date: 10/7/2013 12:45:00 AM
I deal alot with the wind and sea in my profession and you have captured everything perfectly here, your fans and friends are blessed to know you and your talent. Blessings Carl.
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Date: 10/6/2013 8:15:00 PM
Thanks a lot your so sweet and I appreciate your comment on my first acrostic. Kudos. Love and hugs. Baron Of Ebullion
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Date: 10/4/2013 7:41:00 AM
A personified PD as the wind with all your special qualities! You have such a way with words. This is charm and beauty like you. I am praising you and your talent so much because this poem is pure sweetness (with a little hate). I would say (since I can be vulgar) that I feel like wind just gave me a bj :). I am chuckling too much--sorry. Anyway, you captured yourself and your beautiful attributes to a "T". I am very fond of your words as are so many people. You are beautiful.
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Date: 10/1/2013 5:10:00 PM
Reassuring words; so comforting!
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Date: 9/26/2013 8:47:00 AM
The power of wind the power of words, beautiful and inspiring ..... with love....Ellie
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