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The Wind

The wind it blows across the sea And all around the sky The wind it blows to hold you close And be there by your side The wind it blows around the trees And touches every curve The wind will sing the softest songs So you'll hear every word The wind will sometimes bring the clouds And sometimes brings the rain The wind it only brings these clouds For rainbows on the plains Sometimes when you stand alone You'll feel a breeze within If this breeze does bring the clouds Then let me be the wind

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 10/15/2008 8:32:00 PM
I really like this poem about the wind. It flows very well and is inspirational. I like how the title flows throughout the poem and is reinforced with repetition. This poem flows as soft as the winds and is uplifting as the wind uplifts a kite in flight. Great job! ~Joseph
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Date: 10/14/2008 12:50:00 AM
Lovely. Sweet and serene all at the same time. I like the last line, it took my breath away!! And thank you for commenting on lover's lament. Peace Fathima
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