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The Willing Soul

The soul is but the interface Of life and death combined The body and the spirit join And both are intertwined They share the birth of one who yearns To leave the spirit life To part the clouds of happiness And join the worldly strife The soul is but a willing pawn To learn the ways of love To leave the sun of saving grace That shines a light above To join the lost and lose the self In giving what they serve To play the game of balls and strikes And swing at every curve To cheer the one who lost the sun To sing the moon at night Who needs to grow and find the glow Of heavenly delight To gain control and win the goal Of joy and peace of mind To leave the world a better place For ones they leave behind.

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Date: 5/25/2023 6:12:00 AM
Beautiful, Bryan! I love the rhyme. ...Fran
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Date: 12/27/2022 8:22:00 PM
"To leave the world a better place For those I leave behind" - Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Date: 12/27/2022 6:36:00 PM
the last two lines sum it up Bryan. If there is a purpose that should be it....Well done and congrats on your placement.
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Date: 12/19/2022 2:10:00 PM
What? No Comments? That's crazy! There are very few poets on these boards whose rhyming, flow /cadence, message and just overall brilliant poetry help them - in my mind - stand out from all the others Bryan - and you are one of those very poets. Cheers - Gary
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Bryan Norton
Date: 12/20/2022 9:21:00 AM
Thank you, Gary. That was very kind of you. Yes, it would be nice to have the occasional comment, if anything, to keep me from embarrassing myself. Apparently, I need to try harder. Well thank you, my friend. Bryan

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