The Will

Careful how you act when your parents treat you well You may get left out!

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/23/2011 10:05:00 AM

Speaks well of the impact a child's behavior can have on the parents' desires to reward them (or not)! Great advice for children of al ages, Judy. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/21/2011 7:02:00 PM

good advice Judy .. much to think about now and beyond .. enjoyed and thankxx my friend..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/21/2011 11:25:00 AM

Judy,,, YOUR A CLEVER HAIKU ARTISIT... THANKS FOR THE LOVELY POEMS,.. AND ENCOURAGEMENT ,..P.D.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/20/2011 9:13:00 AM

Expressions nicely worded on today's day to day affairs, Judy. lovely thought provoking write

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/20/2011 7:01:00 AM

What a beautiful morning. The sun is finally shining, the birds are singing, and I am sharing my day with you reading your wonderful poetry. I hope you have a great weekend Judy. Love, Carol