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The Wife's Prayer

This dear man has made a promise To love me and me alone. Let me not ever forget that Nor the promise of my own. He has expected me to give him All the love he'll ever need May we never fail the other And our oaths be true indeed. Let me not take love for granted. Help me watch the words I say. Let him know he is as cherished As he was our wedding day.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/4/2014 2:07:00 PM
Nice take, lady Joyce! Congrats on your fine win!!!
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Date: 3/3/2014 6:39:00 PM
I like the way you presented this..with the " help me watch the words I say"..Clever and on the mark. BG
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Date: 3/2/2014 7:26:00 PM
Wonderful hope to have, may this husband remain in heaven, congratulations on your win, Joyce
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Date: 3/2/2014 12:55:00 PM
love the sweet sentiment of your piece, joyce.. congrats!
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Date: 3/2/2014 11:02:00 AM
Beautiful truth! Congratulations.
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Date: 3/2/2014 9:28:00 AM
Congrats on your well deserved win Joyce. This is a vision of loveliness. Nicely expressed Quatrain - Connie
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Date: 3/2/2014 4:58:00 AM
Congrats on the win Joyce . No doubt, a great one is this. You are a Champion.
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Date: 3/2/2014 3:50:00 AM
Thanks for supporting my contest and congrats on the fine win, joyce
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Date: 2/11/2014 3:25:00 PM
this is so lovely and sweet, Joyce...nowadays, couples mostly forget their promise that they've made on that special day..the moment they made a vow for each other...glad that you wirte this one to remind us how important those words to stay in love forever...>__<
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