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The Whittlers

The stately county courthouse was their usual meeting place,
a shaded downtown refuge, and a lovely public space,
to sit upon their benches under lofty pecan trees,
wood shavings on their ankles and some cedar twixt their knees.

Those old boys were called the whittlers, but that was a disguise.
They came to speak of mice and men and hang out with the guys.
Born long before the TV went and addled peoples wits,
they sure could tell some stories that would cause your sides to split.

They'd kid me 'bout the pile of books that I had just checked out.
Said I was sure to ruin my eyes and fry my brain no doubt.
But I guess they got a kick out of their devoted fan,
'cause they'd  trot out all their stories and tell them all again.

There were stories of big ranches and oil boom shanty towns,
of work on rigs as roughnecks and touring rodeo clowns,
and how they used to ride the rails when no work could be found,
but the way they spun those stories had me rolling on the ground.

And in between a whittle and another spit and chew,
they showed me how to whet a knife and tie a buckaroo.
Though they had so many stories and lessons to impart,
I'd have to hear the cowboy code before I could depart.

"You give a man a good hard shake and look him in the eye.
If you mess up, tell it straight, never cover with a lie.
Always give a full day's work and live out each day with heart.
A man's no good without his word, so finish what you start.

Protect the weak and help them, and respect your elders, too.
Never leave a friend behind, nothing else will ever do.
And when your days on Earth are done, according to God's plan,
you can face up to the reaper, and meet him like a man.”

If that was all I learned from them, that lesson was enough.
For a kid without some guidance, this life can be quite tough.
I guess the folks made fun of them, and thought them no account.
For me they were the heroes I would trade for no amount.

The stately county courthouse still stands strong upon those grounds,
although now those shaded benches are nowhere to be found.
And where once the mighty whittlers would carve and hold their court,
the squirrels now gather up pecans and chase around for sport.

© December 28, 2013

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  1. Date: 12/9/2014 3:38:00 PM
    Where is Tom Green County? Have a female friend who is interested in taking up whittlin' as a hobby. This is perfect for her. Jim Horn

    Jerden Avatar Roy Jerden
    Date: 12/9/2014 4:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi James! Tom Green County is in central-west Texas. The county seat is San Angelo, my home town. This poem is mostly fictional, as is true of about all my stuff, however the whittlers were real. The picture of whittlers is one I snagged from the internet and is not San Angelo, unfortunately. Cheers, Roy
  1. Date: 4/30/2014 4:40:00 AM
    This was magic Roy! Congrats on your win and on your poem being featured. I just can't keep up with all the poems. It is overwhelming. I remember my grandfather telling us stories of riding the rails to find work and it brought back fond feelings. He lived though the most difficult times of our country,

  1. Date: 4/30/2014 4:39:00 AM
    Cont'd. through the dust bowl and depression. Kids now days think they have it hard but heck when you have a Kindle or Nook you have the entire library at your finger tips, I call that amazing! Loved the photo too.

  1. Date: 4/28/2014 2:45:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading this; it had heart and soul.

  1. Date: 4/22/2014 2:03:00 AM
    Brilliant write and congrats on the win, Roy

  1. Date: 4/21/2014 10:00:00 PM
    ROY Congratulations, AWESOME POEM:) Thank you so much for taking your time in supporting my contest... Always & Forever *Linda

  1. Date: 3/27/2014 4:42:00 PM
    Excelent down home poem, Roy. Your one lucky guy to share their company.

    Jerden Avatar Roy Jerden
    Date: 3/27/2014 8:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Larry!
  1. Date: 1/12/2014 10:55:00 AM
    An amazing piece! Positively riveting... I could see them without even the pictures!

    Jerden Avatar Roy Jerden
    Date: 1/12/2014 12:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Carol, I think there must be some small-town girl in you somewhere. Thank you so much.
  1. Date: 1/5/2014 7:23:00 PM
    aha, cowboy poetry. That is what Joyce loves to write and Robert too. I saw the picture and was wondering how long you have been visiting those guys!! very nice theme for your cowboy poetry, roy.