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The Whisper

Can you hear my whisper, is it loud and clear. Can you hear my whisper, I'm by your side so near. Can you hear my whisper, do you feel it's breeze. Can you hear my whisper, does it put you at ease. If yo hear my whisper, you know that it is I. If you hear my whisper, you know I am close by. Is my whisper soft and warm can you feel me thre. Is my whisper taking form, do you know I care. My whisper is there nearby, I want to help you see. My whisper comes from inside, with you I'll always be. I found Paradise it's oh so sweet, now it is my turn to save you a seat.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/30/2016 2:02:00 PM
Oh Diane this is such a comforting poem - yes our loved ones are always close and watching over us even though they are no longer with us physically :-) thanks for pointing me in the direction of this poem I do appreciate your thoughtfulness:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/10/2016 7:36:00 AM
Great reminder of good flowing from the invisible world. Welcome to soup's garden.
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Date: 2/23/2016 2:35:00 PM
- A pleasure to read your first poem here P- Soup - Welcome, Diane :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/17/2016 2:10:00 PM
Awesome poem, Diane, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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