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The Whip-Poor-Will

I hear in the evening oh, what a lonesome sound. I can never know where he’s at, he just seems to be around. Is it a broken heart that makes him seem so down? Or, is he just a faker, sitting up there in his coat of brown? Does he ask for sympathy, in a bird sort of a way? What does he do with his time in the middle of the day? Does he quietly do his work and only cries out his plight?. Or, is he a vagabond, sleeps all day and stays up at night? Has anyone ever seen him as he hides in that tree? There are so many things about him that are a mystery to me. But, late in the evening when I hear him sing the blues, I have to guard my heart or I’ll be crying too.

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Date: 1/17/2022 6:00:00 AM
Lovely poem Patrick! Debx
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Date: 1/5/2022 1:05:00 PM
Oh, amazing. Love it. God bless you friend. Love, Gina
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Date: 1/5/2022 11:55:00 AM
Hello Patrick Kelly, I have never seen a Whiperwill. Are they big birds? Enjoy your day my friend.
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Date: 1/11/2022 2:28:00 PM
Darliene, thanks for reading my poem. A Whippoorwill reminds me of a quail, in a way. but a real loner. Very hard to ever see. I'm in Mississippi so we hear them a lot. We have a bird called a snipe but with a long bill. They look alike to me.
Date: 1/5/2022 10:09:00 AM
Craig, I live in the south and not sure what the Whipp00rwill's range. We hear them late in the evening and I got the theme listening one. Thanks for reading.
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Date: 1/4/2022 6:37:00 PM
I’ve heard of whippoorwills but never heard one. This is a lovely piece. Well done.
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