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The Wet Progress

Like a fire placed before her, Serving as a source of tommorow's shower Sweat and wail can never be eluded, As she proceed through the narrow hotbed Body disrupted, as unexpected scene erupted A fearful lass on a hot coal Experiencing the traumatic show When the kite of life drove-by Maintaining her integrity without loosing her tie As she lay her hand on the keg of sweat, She begins to sail out of tommorows fret Determination truly she adore, Making her to see success harbour Tartness like a movie she watch in rising Then, let the sweet chowder appear in her dusk With her eyes on her true goal Strongly, she keeps herself under the broil Her spirit turns bright, As she keep off her voyage sprite Beautiful night she see in true hope Albeit she hack it in the labour rope I never knew she could smile like a valour, When her appearance becomes sour A plucky girl with strong power to steer, On the negligence of the labour tear Then, today she see herself in wail Tommorow will bring gleesome ray.

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Date: 11/12/2016 7:40:00 AM
Smart1, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 11/17/2016 12:34:00 PM
Thank you so much, Ma. Actually, I love writing inspirational and romantic poems using my artistic writing talent, involving the use of my imagination potentiality. I'm so happy to have you as my friend, and I hope also that you will be my mentor, serving as my platform of improvement!
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Date: 11/17/2016 12:34:00 PM
Thank you so much, Ma. Actually, I love writing inspirational and romantic poems using my artistic writing talent, involving the use of my imagination potentiality. I'm so happy to have you as my friend, and I hope also that you will be my mentor, serving as my platform of improvement!

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