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The Well of Dreams

Black foggy darkness swallowing me whole enveloping me in madness I can't seem to control dripping smoothly down my throat it stings horrible grotesque aftertaste it brings clamping tighter can't breathe, lungs burst grasping the lasting soul dream to quench my thirst plunging head first I tear through asunder crashing off these empty walls like sharp lighting and thunder light breaks, a dawn thrust forth and born again Ascending I break the surface towards the sky a blue and white rhapsody of ribbons floating by sparkling droplets shimmer in my eyes i awaken, my dream has ended.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/9/2013 12:50:00 PM
Elya, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 7/2/2013 3:45:00 AM
This is beautiful and well written. I love the contrast from the beginning changing at the end.
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