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The Weight of the World

It saddens me To read poems of our poets Anguish of life And society knows it The threat of eviction Because no jobs can pay Multi conglomerates Stand in our way Their tall buildings Overlook our homes Shadowing the poor Savings they comb Destitute families Looking for a way out Administration Give them a shout We voted you in To change for the good No wonder so many Have to turned to the hood The weight of the world Is on us all But the ones at the top They rarely fall So Corporate America And corporates worldwide You wouldn't be there Without us, by your side Written after reading James Peranteau's poem " I'll loose my little Son " whilst listening to Tommy Shaw's " The Weight of the World " http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/loss.php

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/6/2009 5:41:00 AM
What a beautiful way to show a friend your heart James this is just beautiful the thought, sad the poem ... love Jayne x x
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Date: 9/2/2009 5:46:00 PM
James, be sure James Peranteau sees this poem. I think it will reassure him that there are people who care. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/2/2009 5:45:00 PM
I, too, was moved greatly by James' fears of losing Noah. He is such a wonderful father. I'm beginning to wonder if we can find any leaders who can get us out of this financial mess. So many people I know are struggling. God bless you for reminding us that corporate America "wouldn't be there without us by (their) side." Excellent poem! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/29/2009 3:44:00 PM
Nice subject matter, James may get a lot worse before better. Good write, witty on your part. Sincerely Moses
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Date: 8/29/2009 3:39:00 PM
Nicley written, James. Some people in America are really having a difficult time while others are safely secure or are they. Keep writing. Sara
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