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The Weaver

T’was flair from the cobbles that drove the loom with forced hardy sweat they laboured till eve a family tradition from the womb with threaded shuttle and reed hook they weave. The warp the weft that nurtured the blending the clatter the din the need of lip sync a marriage of yarns a pattern pending the huff and the puff with no time to blink. This place the cornerstone belonged one’s life town mill chimneys stretching into the clouds the smog the fog to cut through with a knife one pence to pay if late due to the crowds. While in the countryside the manor house no longer ‘His Grace’ but master with nous. © Harry J Horsman 2018

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Date: 10/27/2018 7:20:00 PM
Thank you Harry for the fine example of the sonnet.
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Date: 10/9/2018 8:31:00 AM
I am back again to read this wonderfully crafted sonnet. As noted before this is a gem and should be read often. Such depth, quality and great insight held within..
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Date: 10/3/2018 6:12:00 PM
G'day harry … a classic sonnet harry, and oh, haven't times changed - thanks harry - Lindsay
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Date: 8/10/2018 1:01:00 AM
Nicely written :) I really enjoyed the imagery . Beautiful
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Date: 7/31/2018 8:48:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your work. Reads like a good contender for the contest. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 7/26/2018 7:09:00 PM
Just came back to say hi and thanks for your comment. Sure hope this one places (and that mine does too. haha)
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Date: 7/26/2018 12:44:00 PM
Excellent Sonnet. Fantastic imagery. It has a great flow.
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Date: 7/26/2018 10:41:00 AM
excellent sonnet, Harry
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Date: 7/26/2018 5:22:00 AM
Bravo! Now this is a great sonnet. A true pleasure to read and learn from my good friend! A fav...
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Date: 7/25/2018 8:14:00 AM
Hi Harry : May I say that I was definitely in awe of this poem. It senses a classic prose from the old bards. My compliments!
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Date: 7/25/2018 3:30:00 AM
I love this sonnet harry xx
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Date: 7/24/2018 5:53:00 PM
I do believe it IS your best sonnet, Harry. Love how you portrayed this place!
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Date: 7/24/2018 2:06:00 PM
Interesting and original theme, Harry. I like the narrative and imagery in this sonnet. Good luck in the contest. // Barry
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Date: 7/23/2018 5:37:00 PM
You got a language all of your own here, well done, its a classy poem Harry
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Date: 7/23/2018 11:31:00 AM
enjoyed the renaissance feel of this sonnet, harry... lovely story!...huggs
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Date: 7/23/2018 9:52:00 AM
I love the mood of this piece Harry. I’m glad I dropped by.
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Date: 7/23/2018 8:46:00 AM
You have weaved a great sonnet my friend...enjoyed...^WW^
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Date: 7/22/2018 9:31:00 PM
Just wonderful, Harry! Great imagery, great sonnet!
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Date: 7/22/2018 5:19:00 AM
Wonderful imagery all thru this sonnet. Your words sre phrased perfectly to me. I like 'the huff the puff with no time to think'. Well done! :)
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Date: 7/22/2018 1:35:00 AM
Excellent sonnet, Harry, sums up the sweat and graft so well. We have Richard Arkwright's MAsson Mill museum at Cromford up the road, and a walk round there brings it all to life. Hard times. Regards, Viv
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Date: 7/21/2018 11:53:00 PM
Your poem is graced with stunning imagery and divine lexicon Harry! Wish I had more time in my day to read and comment. School is out and I watch my six yr. old granddaughter thru summer. I loved this beauty my friend! : )
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Date: 7/21/2018 6:05:00 PM
Words wonderfully illustrate the imagery in your poem..excellent details...enjoyed reading your poem, Harry.
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Date: 7/21/2018 5:39:00 PM
Harry, you weave poetry into our souls!
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Date: 7/21/2018 3:54:00 PM
Painting from memory serves you well Harry. I can see the chimneys billowing smoke turning the sky grey as i read. I enjoyed this immensely:)
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Date: 7/21/2018 3:53:00 PM
Beautiful sonnet Harry, love the imagery of bygone days. Tom
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