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The Weatherman Says

Good morning ladies and gentlemen, I'm just looking out my door. It has been raining through the night, Looks like we'll get some more. But don't worry all you gardeners, The sun will be out soon. Just as quick as this snow melts, Your flowers will start to bloom. The wind will blow away the leaves, So you can cut your grass. I am your local weatherman, A right pain in the ass. 11/march/2022 You're a weather forecaster poetry contest Sponsored by Matt caliri

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Franci Hoffman

Date: 7/11/2023 4:58:00 AM

I love the humor at your finale and so true. A very enjoyable piece, my friend.

Simon Hamill
Date: 7/13/2023 2:31:00 AM

Hi Franci, glad you liked it. Thank you, take care:-)

Joanna Feltham

Date: 7/7/2023 12:56:00 PM

Brilliant. I enjoyed your poem. It has great rhythm and rhymes, a real joy to real. Thank you for sharing.

Simon Hamill
Date: 7/8/2023 5:26:00 PM

Thank you, I was a little worried about the last word.lol. hope it brings a smile.take care.

Jeanette Brewin

Date: 7/7/2023 11:57:00 AM

A good poem. Well done.

Simon Hamill
Date: 7/8/2023 5:24:00 PM

Thank you, I enjoyed writing this one.lol. take care

Emilia James

Date: 6/14/2022 3:22:00 PM

They are a pain when they get it wrong. Temp suppose to get up into the 30's here on Friday. I am not looking forward to that. So ice cream and chilled wine it is lol. Emilia : )

Simon Hamill
Date: 6/15/2022 3:53:00 PM

Hello.i think your over doing it with the ice-cream as well.lol just stick to the wine.

Franci Hoffman

Date: 3/13/2022 4:19:00 PM

A delightful and clever poem. Very enjoyable, Simon.

Simon Hamill
Date: 3/29/2022 5:50:00 PM

hi franci.its nice to try and have a little fun,we have all had enough doom and gloom these last couple of years,take care.simon.:-)

Natasha L Scragg

Date: 3/11/2022 10:44:00 AM

Ha ha! This is fantastic. So lyrical to read and I love the last line! Did you ever hear the song, " Blame It On The Weatherman. "? Your last line reminded me of this ... Lol thank you for your funny forecast :-D :-D :-D

Simon Hamill
Date: 3/29/2022 5:46:00 PM

hi natasha, glad you liked it,was a little worried about the last line,lol.take care,simon:-)