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The Way You Came

"The summer has come" "The summer? It is the spring now" "Yes I know, but for me it is summer" "Why?" she asked giggling "When you are beside me, The world is very colourful, The cuckoo sweetly sings, The flowers blooms in many colours, You have come to my winter, With your spring and summer, You filled my heart with flames of love, I hear nothing but your sweet melody, My heart was once laden with melancholy, They all are evaporated With your warmth, I can embrace and hide inside you, But I have to leave very soon, I may not return, my time is up. Then whom will you warm?" " There will be many Come for my warmth The way you came to this geisha girl"

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Date: 7/27/2013 6:19:00 AM
Much better! Now it flows and the message is clear. Well done.
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Date: 7/26/2013 11:27:00 PM
I am not sure the form but I did enjoy reading. Is the Geisha calling the man spring and summer or is it the other way around??
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Manel Gunatillake
Date: 7/26/2013 11:54:00 PM
I made some editing after your comment. . it is the other way around
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/26/2013 11:29:00 PM
My feeling is that it is the female voice building the mans ego.
Date: 7/26/2013 11:24:00 PM
wow, I sure am enjoying your poetry recently . I'm gonna check out one more.
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Date: 7/26/2013 9:14:00 PM
This is beautiful and very tenderly written. Thanks for sharing..... Lucilla
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