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The Way May Be Dark

O Blissful Beautiful Sun Pray Light my life all the time To sparkle with light shall I So that your creation shall not be lost O Moody grey moon Do shine your lamp in pity For my tunnel is so dark May both you and Sun guide my way in life Parise Pariku

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/8/2012 2:22:00 AM
ooo... awesome... great write,,,:) may the sun and moon's hug and kiss u endlessly...
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Date: 7/6/2012 10:59:00 PM
this is very nice. Both sun and moon are such an important part of our lives and great objects of poetry!
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Date: 7/6/2012 8:42:00 PM
A G., ooo I love the entrance of your verse. The ending also has light shining through and through... enjoyed..PD
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Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Date: 7/6/2012 10:06:00 PM
Thks PD ~~ :)

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