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The Way Love Goes

Fresh like the kiss of Dr. Pepper, On my lips, I give to you. For you sanctify my everyday, And help me make it through. The smell of your hair, After taking a warm bubble bath. The sound of your tone, When you giggle and laugh. Are the littlest things in life, That draw me to your realm. Our ship of love is better steered, When you miss captain’s at its’ helm. We sail the waters of love, Destined for the shores of eternity. To walk hand-in-hand in the sand, Together you and me. I love the way you look at me, And the way our love flows. We make each other feel special, For that’s the way love goes.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/25/2009 1:49:00 AM
Charming lines from a romantic heart.
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Date: 3/23/2009 11:32:00 PM
That's the way it goes. Tyler
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Date: 2/26/2009 6:04:00 PM
Beautiful, romantic piece, Raul! Just lovely in flow and rhythm. The tone you set is peaceful and rich. Donna G.
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Date: 2/24/2009 8:31:00 AM
Truly lovely sentiments here, Raul ! I can even smell the scent of the bubble bath...enchanting poem! ~ Carrie
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Date: 2/24/2009 7:45:00 AM
Beautiful expression of love, Raul! Sweet and endearing, it is a true love poem! Love, Robin
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Date: 2/24/2009 7:25:00 AM
Could not agree more,a wonderful write,God Bless,Marie
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Date: 2/24/2009 6:43:00 AM
absolutely incredible... the way love goes.... what a perfect way to end and title this poem! great write! ~ Arany
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Date: 2/24/2009 6:20:00 AM
A wonderful write my friend.. this is so sweet and it flows so well.
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Date: 2/24/2009 3:57:00 AM
A lovely poem Raul.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 2/24/2009 3:27:00 AM
Oh Raul I love the Dr. Pepper thing, its always wine, but Dr. Pepper so totally original. I think I'll do chocolate milk next time. Naw some things just do not work. smiles Raul. Laurie
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Date: 2/24/2009 3:24:00 AM
That is the way love goes, but not for us all. You painted a fantasy for most of us in this one. Nice job. Love E.
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Date: 2/24/2009 2:47:00 AM
"Fresh like the kiss of Dr. Pepper, on my lips, I give to you". Great line, I like the descriptions you use. DN
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Date: 2/23/2009 9:17:00 PM
Another heart warming write my dear Raul. You have a way with words that are yours only. I'm gonna have to tell you...I had to add this to my favorites also. Lovely write Raul...keep'em coming ~Belinda~
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