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The Way Home Visual2

The quiet forest green meadow stretches to the horizon. While heavy laden wagons have vanished in the darkening gray. Their deep cut trail gives my eyes a silent path to reach home. contest Glorious Sijo Fields visual 2

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Date: 2/15/2015 10:47:00 PM
Frederic, Awesome take, Congrats in Andrea's Sijo contest. -- SKAT
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Date: 2/11/2015 1:35:00 AM
Beautiful !!! Unique take with such an exquisite write Frederic! Congrats on big win!
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Date: 2/9/2015 3:07:00 PM
Ahh!! Great quality poetry!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 2/8/2015 2:24:00 PM
Such a beautiful visual write Frederic many congrats:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 2/8/2015 8:46:00 AM
The last line ends this beauty well. Congrats!
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Date: 2/8/2015 1:01:00 AM
I really loved that final line: "gives me eyes a silent path to reach home" Amazing!!! Congrats in my contest.
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Date: 2/6/2015 6:12:00 PM
This is a delightful and serene sijo, Frederic; and it goes so well with the visual. Love the end line! #7 // paul
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Date: 2/8/2015 7:31:00 AM
...glad to be back with congratulations, Frederic! ...very merited. // paul
Date: 1/31/2015 8:19:00 AM
ohh, full of grace, so soft and gentle, frederick... i'm there passing too by the end...another beautiful work!.. huggs
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Date: 1/30/2015 10:52:00 PM
love your take on the topic.. i chose visual 2 as well,so its interesting to see how many different interpretations can be made of a single picture... best wishes,nad! #7
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Date: 1/30/2015 10:45:00 AM
I love it that you were able to tell a little story in just three lines! Perfectly done!
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Date: 1/29/2015 8:36:00 PM
Nicely done with great imagery!
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