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The Water Runs Through Us

		4-29-2012		The Water Runs through Us 
			The rain comes in waves,like that of tides of the sea,
			Rolling with moss ,The river at the cross, the stones so smooth,
			I take my first steps without you,with ease -deep in the groove,
			It won't be long till I am gone,down the river- looking for the rain,
			Smells like the ocean breeze,just around the bend,I breath free,
			Nothing to lose,I have who I am, nothing more to gain.

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  1. Date: 4/29/2012 4:09:00 PM
    Hi Ricky, I do see hope in this poem, although there is hopelessness there also. Nice poem. Hugs, Catie :)