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You cannot own my body, heart, or mind My essence is illusive like the air So do not try to hold me down; don’t dare! I’ll break away from all you use to bind I am embodiment of freedom’s call The cosmos is not broad enough for me For I am more than what your eyes can see My soul is deep; it cannot break your fall And though my savage heart is warrior bred I stand before you coy, somewhat demure But should you try to capture me, be sure Between your soul and death, I’ll leave a thread There beats a goddess heart inside my chest I know my worth, and so I can command Allegiance to my love and each demand You need to be on par, to pass the test You cannot hope this mighty queen to rule Capitulate your heart, give up your right You’ll live to see the dawn vanquish the night Then my desires will burn you up for fuel You will be mine; on you I’ll gorge and feed My wants and every craving, I will sate For passion in my soul could never wait When I am done, you’ll live to tell the deed! I am a warrior princess; I’m the one the stars and moon and sun obey my voice And yet you linger near me, by your choice The fight for your submission, I have won! Eileen Manassian

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Date: 11/9/2017 1:24:00 PM
your pen eileen sings crowning golden piece beautifully painted
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Date: 11/8/2017 4:59:00 PM
"My soul is deep; it cannot break your fall" - such great lines....that one particularly I love. I also really like "Between your soul and death, I’ll leave a thread" - the power of this goddess's soul is intriguing and empowering. The deepest, greatest parts of our souls lies in our ability to love, and in that love we can strengthen and be strengthened! You are a winner, that's for sure. A gorgeous piece! Always, Laura
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Date: 11/6/2017 4:57:00 PM
The language of a true warrior princess...power yielding and invincible! Hard to find a chink in your armour, Eileen:) Hugs ... ps been away on a mid-term break in Sicily; now I have heaps of mail & comments to catch up with!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/7/2017 9:22:00 AM
I have missed you. I'm glad you have had a good time. My semester is one of my busiest. I am spending some time before I have to go to a meeting. Oh....the real Eileen has many chinks in her armor, but the Warrior Princess has none! ;)
Date: 11/6/2017 2:35:00 PM
This brings a smile! This can be your Anthem. I enjoyed this very much.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/7/2017 9:23:00 AM
Thank you, Richard. I needed to vent and so I took on my favorite persona. :) Poetry is beautiful that way....You poem dedicated to the warrior princess will always be a favorite of mine.
Date: 11/4/2017 9:11:00 PM
That's a powerful poem, Eileen!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/5/2017 12:34:00 PM
Thanks, Agnes. The beauty of poetry is that it gives you a chance to be someone else for a little period in time. I love it. Hugs
Date: 11/4/2017 8:20:00 PM
An epic for sure Eileen, loved this, if ever you have a sword in your hand, I shall have a dozen red roses in mine, just to be on the safe side!!!! Hugs!! :)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/5/2017 12:34:00 PM
;) Always better to be safe than sorry. I love the Warrior Princess Persona. Gives me a surge of strength that suits me quite well. hugs...Oh..I'll take those roses, if you please...
Date: 11/4/2017 7:13:00 PM
I give in, I surrender, I submit, oh mighty warrior princess, aka my little Desert Orchid, you have a way with words that would make anyone kneel before you. This persona is so you. Take care, Richard
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/6/2017 2:37:00 PM
Hi Richard, great to see you back commenting. Do drop by for a visit.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/5/2017 12:32:00 PM
See that you do, Mr Richard D Seal, or your punishment will be great. The Warrior Princess has spoken. Hope you are doing well. I'm definitely a feminist who likes to be treated like a Queen. Some say that is an contradiction in term, but I can make it work...if given the power. ;) Thanks for the visit.
Date: 11/4/2017 1:57:00 PM
such strength and power in your lines Eileen and I love that accompanying pic:-) hugs jan xx
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/5/2017 12:30:00 PM
Thanks, Jan. One can dream...XOXO This is my second warrior princess poem. :)
Date: 11/4/2017 12:12:00 PM
I love the strength you show here Eileen
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/5/2017 12:29:00 PM
Thanks, Tim. There is a warrior princess inside me. Every now and then I have to give her a voice. :)
Date: 11/4/2017 11:23:00 AM
Yes Mistress, wow! Great write...
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/5/2017 12:29:00 PM
One needs to sound off now and again, Charlie. :) At least in poems I can be a warrior princess. Thanks for the visit.

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