The Wall

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Inspired by a poem by ANNE-LISE and one of my favorite songs. ( you can find the English lyrics via Google)

http://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/__haiku_x_92___kids_can_see_colors___850601

The Wall Just another brick in the wall One by one by one Trump thinks he has won His wall is narrow as it is tall His wall seems in fallible His rhetoric rusts and soon will crumble His wall it will not fall For my army shall make it ever taller For I have a message I wish to make clear My army I send, so listen to this message dear We shall march up to your wall of division and fear With paints and markers and messages to forestall Any hate you try to install We are the children Who write on the walls Bringing hope and love and white doves from above We have bullets filled with hugs and love We shall drop bombs of smile filled hopes We are the ones, who say no more Our wall is a painting of our innocent love Of mankind, and all races god created from above Imagine Such beauty and harmony Imagine

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Dalia Shahein

Date: 11/20/2016 8:58:00 PM

Great write my dear and yes children's is nation hope , cause that stupid Trump is going to release hell cause he's just a bloody stupid.

Jean Murray

Date: 11/19/2016 4:47:00 PM

Yes, our children are our only hope. Unlike our own generation who were blinkered by church and state, our children, through the internet, have the knowledge and power to act as one. In love. We pray.

Alexis Y.

Date: 11/17/2016 4:07:00 PM

Hi Arthur, You were inspired to write a heartfelt poem. I was moved by it's message of love, and peace. Well done. A Big seven:-) Alexis

Carol B.

Date: 11/17/2016 1:26:00 PM

Arthur you have a beautiful heart! I sure can imagine such beauty and harmony and pray it will happen :)

Ralph Sergi

Date: 11/17/2016 12:49:00 PM

Hi Arthur: I was deeply touched by your poem and the video was heart warming. I'm finally glad that I wasn't the only one who wrote a poem about him. GREAT WRITE!

Tim Smith

Date: 11/17/2016 12:21:00 PM

I can imagine it. If the children do it so can the adults. Open your eyes, your hears, your minds and come together as one beautiful and colorful world

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/17/2016 12:06:00 PM

- I hope this will be read by many !!! - A wonderfully vidio, of the rainbow children ... from all over the world !!! - Your poems are amazing and are perfect for today's picture ... where the world can seem crazy and scary - It is an honor that my name has been mentioned on this page, Arthur - thank you! - a big 7 + fav !! - Peace and love without wall // hugs from Anne-Lise :)