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The Wall

It was decades ago, When my two eyes were young, That they savored the Tiergarten And Kurfurstendamm— That avenue, tree-lined, With Berliners, it bustled— And Tempelhof airport, Where pilots, undaunted, Overflew the blockade; And the river Spree flowed Through the heart of the city And, there, in the East Rose the Brandenburg Gate Though, always, these eyes, Spurred on by intrigue, Wandered their way To monuments marking Where tyranny triumphed And Germans had vanquished, Vanquished pursuing The hope of their freedom— Yes, Berlin I once saw And, still, to this day, What affected me most Was the scar of The Wall. October 25, 2016 The Wall poetry contest Anthony Slausen

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Date: 10/29/2016 7:57:00 PM
I think when anyone mentions the Wall even today our first thought of anyone past 50 would be of Berlin. I enjoyed your poem David. I have a tiny piece of the wall with a framed picture of the wall hanging on my wall. A great write! Congratulations on your placement David. 7 ; )
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Date: 10/29/2016 1:35:00 PM
I loved the personal viewpoint. You have taken us with you to the place and the time ! Well done !!
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Date: 10/29/2016 9:02:00 AM
Congrats well-done great poem x
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Date: 10/26/2016 1:37:00 PM
This poem is too good dear David,enjoyed it! The scar of the Berlin wall....remains...nicely written, GOOD LUCK:)//love, Anu:)
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Date: 10/25/2016 8:18:00 AM
I like this poem. Good luck in the contest!
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