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The Wall

like a blind ant without it’s antennae who rams against a wall too slippery to climb over so he runs along the wall first to the left then to the right searching for an opening he never gives up running along that wall searching for that opening somewhere… such a silly blind ant without his antennae who rams against a wall too slippery to climb over you’re in the right place at the wrong time However: even the smallest ants cast long shadows I am a silly blind ant who rams against a wall too slippery to climb over so let us cast a long shadow together... let us go backwards now retrace our steps to where we began to that wall we call home We will find that opening somewhere… Submitted for: scott thirty seven’s contest

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Date: 1/11/2015 2:05:00 PM
This is a tough contest and you wrote an awesome entry for it, Tim! I'm happy to be reading new posts from you...on my way to another :))
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Date: 1/2/2015 11:52:00 PM
I like this so much Tim ! Best wishes for you in the contest...HUGS, Deb
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Date: 1/2/2015 7:02:00 PM
I am struggling to get round the concept for the contest - you have done a great job Tim - good luck:-) Hugs Jan xx
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