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The Wall

We haven't spoken in so long The wall has been built up Big and strong. But now I'm reaching to You And I feel no sign coming. Is the wall too high, Can you see me? Do You realize I need a guide? I've been gone so long, I hid. But now I'm here I need a sign. I'm reaching up to You Please hear my cries. Now I realize all the pain inside Now I know what it feels like... To have light, but also hear nothing.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/25/2011 9:39:00 PM
Check out the second line of your fourth verse. I believe you inadvertently omitted the "e" where you have typed "gon". Everything else looks fine.
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