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The Waiting Room

The Waiting Room The April weather shifted high to low, Exposing those early clout casters To the concluding bite of winter; Footsteps full of foreboding Trudge their last legs up the inclined driveway To the Doctor’s old house. A hotchpotch of chairs and wooden benches Cling to the borders of the waiting room A ballroom of romance for the sick. In varying degrees of ill-health A gamut of the townspeople Chorus a cacophony of coughs Sniffling and wheezing feverishly, While the readers’ digest stale stories From the well-thumbed publications. Eyes darting around the room Surveying the afflicted to kill the time Conjecture at the probable cause and severity; Childlike comparisons to ones’ own condition. A new mother fails to stifle a yawn Spreading contagion to the assembled Her flushed snoozing baby Unaware of her blaming chatter. Life-weary pensioner invited to the inner sanctum Chilled to the bone, sciatica stricken, Accepts the decree of the medic Without question or comment. His framed degree, long faded, Enough to stifle her to silence His stethoscope, as a Priests garb To her, underpinning his status. Two codgers still await their summons More regularly neighbours at the bar Boisterously chatting across the room For the oblivious benefit of the throng; Socialising symptoms best supressed Public bravado before their private hearing, Selective honesty, the order of the day. Quiet couple with obviously hidden issue Whisper conspiratorially in the half lit room Embracing the background murmur And the dimness, aid to their privacy. Vice-Captain of the junior team, Fit, and embarrassed at his minor disorder Conjures up exaggerated “near death” vocabulary For future reportage to the team His shame cajoled into the ether By his twisting of the physicians’ imagined words. And all the while the waiting room remains Constant, a silent witness to all ills.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/13/2015 7:46:00 AM
An honest account of a doctor's waiting room. I begin to wonder who picks the music at our surgery. Nothing uplifting, reminiscent of a dirge at times. Delice
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Brendan Osborne
Date: 5/13/2015 7:49:00 AM
Yours has music? Lucky you! :-) My problem is the reading material - ancient and dishevelled. Thanks for the kind comment! Brendan.
Date: 5/10/2015 8:02:00 AM
I wrote back in reply to your latest post on my "A Filbert" page... You are welcome re. the feedback. Do any of the current contests interest you?
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Brendan Osborne
Date: 5/10/2015 10:30:00 AM
Thanks Julia. I might try my hand at some of the contests when I get more comfortable - like I said I am a novice at this so just feeling my way currently. :-)
Date: 5/10/2015 7:21:00 AM
You accurately convey a waiting room's oppressive atmosphere, Brendan.
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Brendan Osborne
Date: 5/10/2015 7:35:00 AM
Many thanks for your kind words on this and my other early efforts. It is really nice to get feedback on your work! :-)

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