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The Waiting

My heart is full of happiness, Waiting for you is my fervent wish, We’ll see each other again after a long time. You will be here and you’re all mine, But many times has passed, My heart has been crushed, Sadness I felt inside, Will burst and I cannot hide, Where are you my love? I’ll pray from God above, Please be here with me, Look at me and you will see. I can’t take it anymore, My heart is bleeding..so sure, Tears flowing down on my cheeks endlessly, Waiting for you makes my life so miserably. January 4, 2014 4th place Winner PD's "First 2014 Poem Contest" 14th Place Winner Vicky"s "Don't write for the contest contest

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Date: 4/13/2014 3:53:00 AM
gloomy and true for one of those moments of waiting, take care, Bhavna
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Date: 2/12/2014 8:42:00 AM
Wonderful imagery... SKAT
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Date: 1/29/2014 9:28:00 AM
I hope your prayer is answered, congrats.
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Date: 1/29/2014 6:44:00 AM
Wonderful poem and congrats on the fine win, Maria
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Date: 1/29/2014 12:22:00 AM
Wow Maria! This poem really showcases the longing of waiting for that special moment when all will be right and love will abound. Well written!
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Date: 1/21/2014 12:01:00 PM
hello, paz..hope you are working on a new one.. dropping by to ask if you are affected by the protests there in bkk.. take care and huggs
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Date: 1/14/2014 12:55:00 PM
wow..this is deep, and sad... no one should want this... always..Linda
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Date: 1/10/2014 12:16:00 PM
You left me misty eyed on this beautifully heartfelt write of yours my very dear friend Maria. Thank u so much for sharing & my big hearty congratulations on your win as well. You're also a very talented woman not only in Eng. Poetry but in our own Fil. Poetry as well & I admire & so proud of u!! Biggest hugs! Woke up early today. i slept aftr schl ( 2days sports day) & I've missed my dinner ;)). Again, big congrats! love lots, Leonora
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Date: 1/9/2014 10:07:00 PM
Congratulations on this fine win, Maria
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Date: 1/9/2014 7:36:00 PM
a sad and feeling one, Maria. Congrats for your win.
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Date: 1/8/2014 12:45:00 PM
congratulations Maria xx
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Date: 1/7/2014 6:23:00 PM
I hope your wait was not in vain Maria...congrats on the win
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Date: 1/7/2014 3:35:00 PM
Maria, . Congratulations, and thank you for entering my contest. It has been a delight hosting so many contests. If you like you can enjoy the hugs, I left all winning poems on my blog "I WILL BE FAITHFUL." link-------> http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=18505&PoetID=18720 <----- Enjoy and stop by if you'd like...... Always & Forever ** LINDA
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Date: 1/5/2014 12:52:00 PM
ohh, how painfully beautiful this is, paz.. hope it's just fiction.. happy new year.. did you spend it in manila or in bkk?... huggs!
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Date: 1/4/2014 9:13:00 PM
Wow, the sadness is so intense within this incredible write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this dynamic poem here this evening! What a powerful piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 1/4/2014 3:48:00 PM
Hi Maria the longing floods out sadness too. Fine pen Shadow x smile
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Date: 1/4/2014 12:14:00 PM
- Maria .... heartbreakingly sad ...... - Wish you all the best! - Have a nice weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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