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The Waiting

I waited patiently with bated breath Beneath the banyan tree On a cloudless starry night Far away from the city light Waiting for the sound of my beloved beau Wide eyes darting to and fro In a distance I see a horse trot by Off jumped the horseman and ran to my side “I am sorry Miss there has been a twist My Master has been called to enlist He has sent you these flowers and a little ring And has asked you to wait until spring” Off went the horseman on his horse so swift I stare into my hands at the little gifts Tears spilling down in tiny rivulets

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/31/2011 10:54:00 AM
Thank you for posting your wonderful poetry Venetia. It was a pleasure to read. I am hoping you have a wonderful day full of inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/31/2011 3:04:00 AM
really cool poem venetia luv*Skat
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