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The Waiting

What would you say? Of these passing days spent in tears Of distant hopes that have only faded blue thru the years What would you say? Of dreamt dreams colored in dread Of tiny hearts growing black save for the red What would you say? Of jaded eyes which now can only view truths so sheer Toward a light that shouts but one can never hear What would you say? If I’m neither here nor there

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/23/2010 9:31:00 AM
enjoyed your creativity...isn;t there a singer named David Archuletta? what a conincidence...LOL
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Date: 9/23/2010 4:16:00 AM
Very creative and interesting write with doubts for waiting. dave
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Date: 9/23/2010 2:45:00 AM
Interesting write and intruguing write. What does one say? Excellent piece.
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