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My door I left open all night My moistened eyes kept smiling all night ___________________________________________ 15/11/2016

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Date: 11/19/2016 12:58:00 PM
This leaves a lot of room for interpretation. Were you crying from sadness or joy? Was it raining and you were soaking in the humidity? It's thought provoking and a treat for me. This site is a source of joy when I see how some wonderful human beings have a way with words.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/19/2016 7:50:00 PM
Thank you ... Indeed I left the poem open ...
Date: 11/16/2016 9:37:00 AM
Had to research Crystalline poetry, nicely inked, I'm so impatient, I'd cry too. :)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/17/2016 4:30:00 AM
Ha ha, ... thank you ...
Date: 11/15/2016 2:24:00 AM
Such is love Probir. There is no time limit when waiting for love. A great little gem! 7 ; )
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/15/2016 5:24:00 AM
Aww, greetings from unexpected flower ... a gem of my hour ... thank you so much Connie ...

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