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The Vow

Dearest Sarah, I am far away from you with heavy heart I'm always thinking of you couldn't bear to watch the photo of you and me, giving it a kiss and embrace I always wanted to see your face. I'll catch a train in Spring every second I'm remembering the memories that we have and the love you bring. Dearest Jonas, I am so overwhelmed upon receiving your letter I couldn't wait to see you in Spring the day of our wedding the moment we say, "I do" my love I'll give fully to you. we will be wearing our rings a symbol of our promise and everlasting love and all I could dream of. Early morning one Monday in Spring Sarah, wearing the whitest of white and the sweetest smile sitting in her car vividly waiting for the groom to appear in sight when someone approaches breaks the news, starting her plight. Like a child and running wild to his hospital bed, cold in his hand, a paper blood-stained she reads his vow, I promise to love you to stay with you for the rest of my life fill each second with happiness and satisfaction, and a whole lot everything a boyfriend, a lover a husband and father can do I'll do it for you. White gown now red uncontrollable, hugging him tight her vows, trembling, sobbing she recites but how will they ever make their dreams come true she dares him take her along with him, to stay with each other to live with their love if not on this Earth but in the heavens above!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/7/2016 11:00:00 AM
Maricris Cabrera, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Maricris Cabrera
Date: 5/9/2016 9:07:00 PM
Hi, thank you for the welcoming me here. It's a pleasure being a member in Poetry Soup. And it's nice getting acquainted with all the members here but first I will be having a great time to get familiar and let myself tour around in this huge community of yours. Thank you once again. Hugs!
Date: 5/6/2016 8:03:00 AM
Very touching and emotionally charged. I hope this doesn't come from real life.
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Maricris Cabrera
Date: 5/9/2016 9:12:00 PM
Thank you kindly. I am very grateful finally I'm now a member in this community with great poets.

Book: Shattered Sighs