The Voice

"can't" says the, voice inside, but i hold on, unruffled and calm, shove harder to, dimly hear, inside, "can" 21/3/2012 ninette sashi.prabhu(zeauoxian)

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Deborah Burch

Date: 3/29/2012 9:26:00 PM

Congratulations on your win,Sashi!!!Well Done!! Wonderfully encouraging... :)bighuggsss,love~deb

Sashi Prabhu
Date: 3/30/2012 9:10:00 AM

thank you Deborah>>>>>>>>>~sashi

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 3/28/2012 6:04:00 PM

Oh well done! congrats..this is clever. BG

Sashi Prabhu
Date: 3/30/2012 9:11:00 AM

thank you Barbara........~sashi

Kim Merryman

Date: 3/28/2012 3:49:00 PM

Well done, Sashi. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Sashi Prabhu
Date: 3/30/2012 9:11:00 AM

thank you for the wishes Kim..........~sashi

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/28/2012 8:04:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in Joann's "Ninette" contest Sashi. Love, Carol

Sashi Prabhu
Date: 3/28/2012 9:32:00 AM

thank you very much CAROL........~sashi

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/27/2012 8:13:00 PM

congrats sashi on a terrific win for this excellent Ninette written luv..

Sashi Prabhu
Date: 3/27/2012 8:34:00 PM

thank you Linda

Kash Poet

Date: 3/24/2012 8:24:00 PM

This is excellent Sashi.A sure winner here.

Sashi Prabhu
Date: 3/27/2012 8:35:00 PM

your propechy is true......and has been earlier too...... thanks a million Kash for the encouragement and motivation...........~sashi

Sashi Prabhu
Date: 3/25/2012 8:43:00 AM

thank you Kash.~sashi

Joann Grisetti

Date: 3/21/2012 1:47:00 PM

Great job. I love reading these.

Sashi Prabhu
Date: 3/22/2012 9:16:00 AM

thanks ...my first attempt at this technicality of poetry......was a gr8 experience....~sashi