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The Voice

The Voice Naming this voice in my head Causes me to dig deep in a place Where dreams slowly fade away, and hope has gone unfed Frequent darkness and loneliness, I’m struggling in this chaotic space Willfully traveling through this emotional state I begin to realize, this may be my eternal fate Allowing past failures control, my mind can’t carry this weight Feels like I’m slowly falling, holding on by a strand The mind plays certain tricks, hope you understand Voice so intrusive, I know firsthand Mara is your name, the one I’m trying to shed You’re causing all these setbacks, these thoughts I must replace With affirmations, my soul can relate To joy of positivity, this voice now banned August 7, 2021 Content: Writing Prompt - Fragmented Spaces Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France

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Date: 4/25/2024 7:55:00 PM
This is a great simple yet deep relatable smooth flow of a poem, and I really like the style in which the format is written. Not overthought or over-worded ..nice!
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Date: 3/11/2022 11:04:00 AM
Your "The Voice" is a beautiful rhyme write. Have a blessed day writing away.............
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Date: 8/17/2021 8:27:00 AM
Ms, congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt, Fragmented Spaces, using my created form. You made my form look beautiful, well done ~Constance
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Ms Affection
Date: 8/18/2021 7:04:00 PM
Thank you Constance. It was a fun time. I enjoyed the challenge
Date: 8/17/2021 2:51:00 AM
I apologise for not noticing your win in the contest. I hope I'm not losing interest in PS.
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Ms Affection
Date: 8/18/2021 7:04:00 PM
oh, than you so much Victor
Date: 8/13/2021 9:12:00 PM
MS, congratulations on your win in Constance's contest . Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/13/2021 8:11:00 AM
A very beautiful write. Congratulations on your win!
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Ms Affection
Date: 8/13/2021 2:09:00 PM
Thank you Christuraj

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