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The Visitor

He pushed at the open door no sound just darkness inside. Dust filtered his nostrils, a mustiness of lost years inhabited his senses. A loose floorboard creaked in the stairwell, the aroma of her Chanel provoked memories of his living hell. A tear of self-pity congealed in the dirt at his feet He switched on the light "Hello son I knew you'd be back; He's gone..."

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Date: 3/28/2023 8:17:00 AM
WOW this is a very deep, personal write, it says so much and indeed a dramatic verse. Kindest Regards Paris
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Date: 3/27/2023 5:53:00 PM
Startling it is how a living hell can be revisited so often. A definingly deep write Brian. Very much enjoyed it. Respectfully A.S.
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