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The Visitation

Garden sentinel, carrion he’s stripping Woolf tail wagging white fangs ripping Stream-of-consciousness telling, spewing Dog’s breakfast masticating, chewing Mourning doves cooing, woo-OO-ing Backyard cricket legs rubbing, chirping Hot summer night simmering, squalling Beginnings long day ending, waning Winged silhouette floating, rising Sleepy canine lies dreaming, chasing The stranger rises--ascending, falling Moonlight beaming, shadow stalking Temptress appears emerging, merging Tip-toeing apprehensively disrobing Sonnets in Portuguese leather binding Fanning pages dog eared, Browning Arm extended reaching, grasping Reaps a sweet pear salivating Biting, sucking juices dripping Raped senses senses raped Rapture erotica RESIST SISTER! Nibble, nibble Fluids dribble Fires sizzle Nero’s fiddle Plays in-fidelity Forum stories burning, pages turning Read on dear, dear read on Groins churning tongues exploring Stranger disappearing, stealing Into the night’s secret pages folding Apparition’s serpent slithering Lithe away twisting, vanishing Eve repenting, dawn rising Righteous ebbing, malevolent trysting Hew hay glorious Yahweh Angels singing, trumpets playing Sins Original ne’er forgetting, e’er forgiving Lost haven, Milton’s paradise lost Rue the stranger, spare Adam’s rib Lust’s garden grows at night Whilst gluttonous wolves too tired to bite

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Date: 2/12/2016 10:37:00 PM
TOBI, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/4/2012 6:23:00 AM
Congratulations on making it through the 1st round of PoetrySoup International Contest. Wishing you the best in the finals Tobi. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/28/2011 4:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your nomination. This piece is a masterpiece and a pleasure to read. Million thx for sharing And May God Bless!
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Date: 9/27/2011 3:28:00 PM
Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week Tobi. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/26/2011 8:09:00 PM
Congrats Tobi Marie on the featuring of your poem "The Visitation." Vince
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Date: 7/27/2011 9:34:00 PM
very absorbing thoughts you have penned so well, Tobi
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Tobi Marie Hobbs
Date: 7/28/2011 7:19:00 PM
thank you Dr.Ram. once i get situated on this site, i plan to feast on the poetry of many; find favour/favourite poets; and make cordial exchanges.
Date: 7/27/2011 7:00:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Tobi. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Tobi Marie Hobbs
Date: 7/27/2011 3:00:00 PM
Carol, thank you for the warm welcome and kind thoughts.

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