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The Victor's War

War is sweet victory! We exposed their weakness easily. They were no real threat once they realized that the fight was done before their opened eyes. Even if my win comes with their loss, I can't shed a tear in front of the boss.

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Date: 8/16/2009 2:42:00 PM

Interesting perspective in this poem. It leaves the reader with something to ponder. Keep on writing! Karen

Brian Strand

Date: 8/14/2009 2:01:00 AM

A lot of truth hetre Brandee.Thank you for your welcome comments today Rgds Brian

Hana Ryusaka

Date: 8/13/2009 5:56:00 PM

What an interesting form! Thank you for sharing, and for your kind comments. I really appreciate your feedback and encouragement. Keep writing! =]

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 8/13/2009 11:21:00 AM

Brandee, Nice etheree. So much waring going on in the world. Take care, poet friend. Lovingly, Dane

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/11/2009 4:01:00 AM

Bittersweet ending to a compelling poem, Brandee! Indeed, keep your tears to yourself if you are recruited to fight in a war. Very good write! Love, Carolyn

Kevin Mcallion

Date: 8/10/2009 7:38:00 AM

Interesting stuff. This poem can be interpreted in so many different ways and that's what makes it so intruiging. A good write

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/10/2009 5:32:00 AM

Perhaps your words did not get written the way you meant them to be or I am misunderstanding what you have written here. Love, Carol