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The Very Last Dog

She watched her son shovel the earth, The still shape in the blanket gradually disappearing, Resembling a mound of soil in a hole, And finally the ground was flat. She wiped her eyes and went indoors, Her son made her coffee but had to go home. The house was empty without them both - There was no son to chat and no dog to pat - And it wouldn’t change. She feared she wouldn’t outlive another dog, And her son couldn’t take it. She looked at photos of dogs in the past, All loved, but dead now. Holding the last dog’s collar, She knew it had been the very last.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/14/2011 8:27:00 PM
Oh, my that is so sad. I still think she needs another dog!! But I totally get where this is coming from and I sure know her feeling, more and more with the encroaching years! Congratulations on this wonderfully lucid writing.
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Date: 3/9/2011 10:28:00 AM
A sad write but with so much beauty to it. Congratulations on your win in Chris's contest Jack :)
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Date: 3/8/2011 11:23:00 PM
What a very sad write Jack and one in which one can relate to-- my family has also buried dogs, and that last line hit home for me-- I felt exactly the same when we buried our Welsh Corgi... Congrats on your win! :)
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Date: 3/8/2011 8:56:00 PM
Excellent Jack, love these real life poems, awesome, and congrats. Harry
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Date: 3/8/2011 8:35:00 PM
Congrats jack on another amazing win in Chris's contest luv.. great write ..great entry .. great endeavor my friend.. keep going.. and enjoy your wonderful win luv..
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Date: 3/8/2011 5:49:00 PM
This is so touching, Jack. I'm reluctant to get another cat since my Katy died. Who knows how long any of us have? Congratulations on your win. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/8/2011 4:50:00 PM
congrats on your win with ths wonderful piece Jack, thought it was fantastic the first time I read it
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Date: 3/8/2011 1:48:00 PM
This poem reminded me of my brother's last dog named Zeus. Their lives are far too short.
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Date: 3/8/2011 12:52:00 PM
Congratulations on the eighth place win in the contest of Chris, jack
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Date: 3/8/2011 11:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Chris's contest Jack. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/6/2011 8:08:00 AM
i know that feeling
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Date: 3/6/2011 8:04:00 AM
very sad write, beautifully penned
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