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The Very Essense of Your Name

I must have you and all that I want, Sweet nectar of desire from the spirit of love, What length for you shall I fight, For this absolute joy in my life? You sharpen my sword and offer pure light. The piercing eyes of the jealous few, Who wish end of love with absolute rage, Will never taste your sweetest kiss, Nor the decadent smile of pure bliss, You heighten all senses cynics miss. I can feel my growth inside you, In spite of all and who block our way, My heart for you is taken, From tyranny a force will awaken, Freedom ... so dearly we shall not forsaken - The very essence of your name. ............................................. Form: Epic Contest Entry: Your Best (premiere) number one Sponsor: Skat A Results: 10th Place .............................................

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Date: 7/18/2016 1:50:00 AM
Aye, what's in a name? Nothing for the faint of heart.
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Jesse Day
Date: 7/18/2016 7:23:00 AM
Agreed - thanks for reading and commenting. Jesse
Date: 7/16/2016 8:44:00 PM
A powerful poem, Jesse. Congratulations on your fine win in this Premiere Contest. 7 Hugs, Sandra
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Jesse Day
Date: 7/17/2016 6:47:00 AM
Thank you for reading and your comments! Jesse
Date: 7/16/2016 8:26:00 PM
Hi, Jesse. Thank you for the support. Congratulations on your win. I have a part time nlog if you want to stop by. Skat
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Jesse Day
Date: 7/17/2016 6:48:00 AM
Thank you for adding me to your list of winners! Jesse
Date: 6/2/2016 8:49:00 AM
An epic poem! I love it.
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Jesse Day
Date: 6/6/2016 9:45:00 AM
Thanks! I added epic in the description - Jesse
Date: 5/31/2016 1:42:00 AM
enjoyed your read Jesse, thank you for sharing:)... ~Linda~
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Jesse Day
Date: 6/6/2016 9:42:00 AM
Thank you - my pleasure. - Jesse
Date: 5/28/2016 7:58:00 PM
Welcome Jesse to our corner and thank you for reading and commenting. Good luck in the contest Love, Joyce
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Jesse Day
Date: 6/6/2016 9:41:00 AM
Thank you as well for reading and commenting - Jesse
Date: 5/28/2016 2:33:00 PM
- A wonderful poem that you can be proud of, Jesse - I wish you a blessed weekend - hugs //Sun :)
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Jesse Day
Date: 5/28/2016 3:51:00 PM
Thank you, Sun - your words are always supportive to the effort. Bless you and your weekend as well! - Jesse
Date: 5/28/2016 2:06:00 PM
Proud of this one!
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