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the vaporised self

as an aspect of the whole encased in body-mind there is here no goal save to be divine aligned the vaporised self having put mind at rest feels bliss amplify by itself dancing in playful jest nectar cools magnetic heat nodes within form gyrate presence love replete delights as polarities mate

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/17/2024 12:22:00 PM

Another wonderful write. I always enjoy reading your writes... Have A Blessed Weekend Writing Away.........

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 5/17/2024 6:59:00 PM

Thank you, Paula dear

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 5/17/2024 6:30:00 AM

I'm amazed with your God-given ability to write such deep messages and in rhyme. Not everyone has that gift. I especially liked the upbeat nature of these lines: 'presence love replete delights as polarities mate.'

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 5/17/2024 8:26:00 AM

Thank you, Sara. Identity is a bubble of illusion, so we should not claim authorship over any work.