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The Vampyre's Kiss

I never need to see the sun. For all the things I see in you. The kiss that gave me eternal bliss, My words so dark surrounded by pain. Kill me slowly with this knife. I'll never be the same. The darkness covers me like the stars. You I see all around.

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Date: 10/8/2011 8:24:00 PM
The beginnings of a fine tale ballads are 8/6/8/6 in syllable count in 4 line groupings with the last word in the line rhyming. They tell a complete story, beginning, climax and end. Hope this helps and you fill out the whole story so we can all enjoy it with you. Light & Love
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Date: 9/13/2008 8:34:00 PM
pretty dark. thanks for contributing!
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