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The Vampire

My killer saunters forward, grace marks his every move. And I know I cannot win. I stand there, unarmed, while his dagger teeth flash and snap in the icey blue moonlight. He throws me a hunger-tainted smile before making his kill. I watch the life flow from me red and hot while he sits and drinks it in. I am not afraid. My hand twitches limply beside me, a last request to test the reality of this nightmare to end my own life. I wade through the pain and locate my voice. "Who are you?" He stops, caught in the act, and traces a frosty finger along the broken lines of my blood-smeared face. Pauses at my lips. I stop breathing. "Good night." And I am gone.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/10/2010 10:05:00 AM
Thank you!!!!! I'm so happy now! And I will consider the zombie idea! ;)
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Date: 2/10/2010 10:04:00 AM
I encourage you to continue writing Samantha. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/10/2010 9:49:00 AM
good write! i love a good story and i definitly love a scarry story, it was great right up my alley! you should try and write a zombie one lol i hope you do cuz i love zombies stories but if not just wanted to let ya know this is good and i hope you write more. oh and i am happy to be your first comment.
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