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The Unpacked Suitcases

O loving, tender spring, full of growing things, Why is there winter in your eyes? Your quick visit has hurried your slow, fermenting graces ---- Everywhere, far and wide blinding snow! blowing endless white! No more your balmy breeze to lead me outside!

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Date: 3/24/2014 9:08:00 AM
You have skills, this is very good.
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Date: 3/23/2014 7:14:00 PM
Keith, this poem is poignant. It really sums up the passage of warmth. I consider this an allegory for life. You have something wonderful going for you. You have brought tears of joy and sadness to my eyes. Thanks for bringing a little art into my life.
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Date: 3/23/2014 11:23:00 AM
this is such a GOOD poem about spring and its lagging behind!! Love how you personified it with "winter in your eyes" Awesome!
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Date: 3/22/2014 11:03:00 PM
Twisting nature with feelings and visual...wow..intense...like it...
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Date: 3/22/2014 4:36:00 PM
Somehow sad..yet many times sad poems are even more beautiful...Most beautiful as such is this.
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