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The Unlikely Alliance

The unlikely alliance for me you need not be clothed I understand your fragility of which the edges are like krill To you I disclose my being, for only you I rehearse my songs. From the truest vestiges of the heart, where the rumbling of the soul and electric current making multiple zeds as if ignition cannot be.. until it does.. Erupts this volcano inside of me, the magma of the heart cascading walls and gleam. Steaming, hissing ,smoking at your feet and there it halts, and there it cools and I deliver me. Touch me I am warm Feel me I am true. Where us unlikely two shall meet, you the tulip, I the lava. There your trusting brave will do what none would believe. I give you that diamond of the earth, that stone that doesn’t melt, under pressure it was formed. Be sure to stand the allegations of my antagonist How I need your alibi Oh how I yearn for truth

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 12/14/2016 6:42:00 AM
WOW, just wow! This is incredible! The imagery is amazing! 10/10!
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Jannie Breedt
Date: 12/14/2016 2:24:00 PM
Thank you Maryann. I am truly honoured. I qill return the favor and viait your site
Date: 10/25/2016 5:25:00 AM
It is always a blessing to read another poet's wise words. Peace and many blessings my friend.
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Jannie Breedt
Date: 12/18/2016 5:02:00 AM
Sorry for thanking you this late. My adhd keeps me scatter brained all over the place. Greetings and blessings again
Date: 7/24/2016 5:08:00 PM
This is strong and imaginative writing, Jannie. I really like it. Good to see a fine intelligent writer here. Not sure I saw you before, did I? If not, a hearty welcome here!! (unless you are an oldie at Soup!!!)
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Jannie Breedt
Date: 7/26/2016 11:10:00 AM
Thanks my lady. Never you mind as I have been sort of following you and impressed. You were the 1st to welcome somewhere in April with Silent One.
Date: 7/20/2016 7:23:00 AM
Vivid imagery, you write in such a unique way Jannie. Absolutely loved every line.
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Jannie Breedt
Date: 7/20/2016 11:24:00 AM
Thanks Wilma . Welcome to my world

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