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The Unknown Wonders

Laying on the wet grass Admiring the all knowing stars Every night they call to me And we continue the never ending story Sharing the history of our universe

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Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 9/1/2010 5:20:00 AM

Great imagery in this beautiful write my friend. I really love these words, ' Every night they call to me And we continue the never ending story' Great write and many thanks for your kind and precious comments on Patradoot 32. By the end of this epic I am sure you would be thrilled by the beauty of this lovely true story of my father. Love and best wishes always.....Ravindra........Jamecia Buggs

Cecil Hickman

Date: 8/28/2010 10:52:00 PM

beautifully expressed,,In a few lines you have shared your heart, soul and mind,,,,Blessings..Cecil

Ralph Taylor

Date: 8/28/2010 8:50:00 PM

Outstanding word picture, Jamecia. Enjoyed. Thanks for your kind words. xxx Ralph

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/27/2010 2:30:00 PM

Looking up at the night sky can certainly inspire thoughts about the history of our universe as well as mankind's place in God's scheme. Well done, Jamecia! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/27/2010 2:00:00 PM

thankxxx Jamecia .. for your sweet comment about the 'nasty' person who left an unkind comment on my work.. she is making the rounds but I have promptly block her and reported her to Team Poetry Soup .. this sort of thing ins NOT allowed on this site ... some don't even appreciate the poetry luv.. appreciate your comment and enjoyed your poem tonight.. happy weekend.. with luv..

Earle Brown

Date: 8/26/2010 7:32:00 PM

A beautiful view captured in thoughts. I am there seeing from my mind's eye.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/26/2010 7:01:00 PM

Nice thoughts well expressed with images, Jamecia