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The Unkindest Cut

I read about a twelve year old Who fell and cut his arm. His coach gave him a band-aid; There was no cause for alarm. Yet unbeknownst to anyone, Bacteria crept in And multiplied with fierce abandon Underneath the skin. Next day the boy was feeling sick With fever and some pain. The doctor checked him out and thought The cause was pretty plain – With lots of virus going round, That must be what he had; And so she sent him home With very worried mom and dad. He started feeling worse and so They went to N.Y.U.; A fine prestigious hospital Would know just what to do. Alas, they made the same mistake As doctor number one. They took some tests and then dismissed The parents and their son. Yet morning came and he declined. His folks just couldn’t wait. They rushed back to the hospital; By then, it was too late. The doctors somehow’d missed the signs; His body was in shock. Bacteria’d been building armies All around the clock. And no one knew to give the boy The proper ammunition. “We’re very sorry” was the line They got from each physician. Now doctors are just human And of course, they make mistakes; But reading of this family’s loss, My heart just up and breaks.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/18/2012 6:08:00 AM
That is truly sad. Its an excellent piece though.
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Date: 7/17/2012 9:49:00 PM
Something very similar just happened to the 43 year old daughter of a friend of mine. She got swelling in her legs. Docs could find nothing and she was sent home with some anti inflamation pills only to die the next morning from stroke to the heart. My hubbie said, how stupid, even I know that swelling in the leg denotes a blood clot. Doctors today are morons. I really think so and it makes me sad! (you sure told this well) Let me know if you write a book! Your poems make good morality tales
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Date: 7/17/2012 5:42:00 PM
This is such a sad story, especially since it's a true one. I saw this in the news and my heart broke for his family. Good write, Ilene. Love, Kim
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